Thursday, May 6, 2010
The concept of "we"
I still remember
the day you came into my life
till then it was all about me and my
but you cared for me and i copied
creating, the concept of "we"
we would always be together
through every kindda weather
holding hands, listening to one another
being as close as could be
building, the concept of "we"
but when the clouds flew away
sun shone through the day
closeness was irritating
the hands became sweaty
weakening the concept of "we"
we needed each other
as badly as possible
i moulded myself, i complied
seeing your eyes filled with light
i could sense the victory
in saving, the concept of "we"
but now when i look at you
your eyes are frowning
your voice is close to loathing
you dont like me expecting
blurring, the concept of "we"
baby i am still waiting
my arms are wide open
i will change every hair
just for you to stay here
why cant u see me
holding on to, the concept of "we"
you think me to be mean
and i am done avoiding
as tears rolled down my cheek
through blurred eyes i see
you inching away from me
erasing, the concept of "we"
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i just love this concept of "WE"....nice poem yaar..
ReplyDeleteits beautiful. no words to appreciate; its just beautiful.
ReplyDeletemanju
May the concept of we never vanishes for you my little sis
ReplyDeletetoo good poems parul.. i am in love with your poems.. keep going.. you write real gr8...
ReplyDeletethat was way too emotional...real story eh..? ..so nice...you rock :-)
ReplyDeletestunned, bewildered, perplexed, baffled,... bewitched...it went as if i was the protagonist..each one is exceeding expectations than the previous one
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